Creative writing

This week we did some creative writing on a picture. Here is my wrighting and the picture.
L.P.G:9
Should I do this? Is it a good idea? I wonder to myself I had to make a decision that was to do it. I look around it was the sunniest day ever, except I couldn't see the sun but I could see the moon. It was 1:00 o’clock in the afternoon why was the moon out already? And why was there a ladder from my feet to the moon? Is the ladder real? Time to find out.